ella jade

this is an interesting story and I would like to read more. there are a few mistakes that I'm sure you'll catch once you read over it. one thing I ...

I think that this story is good, but has the potential to be awesome. As long as you follow the advice that most of the others said you should do ...

ok, first off I usually don't comment poetry because I suck at it and probably wouldn't be much help but this one I just got to say something. my first ...

Hey. I told you what I thought in study hall{most boring class in world right alongside ms. harrison's}you weren't trying for this to be like real poetry right? just something ...

hey erin. since I told you what I thought of it earlier I'll just touch up on some things. first I argee that you kind of jump into details of ...